The Lagoon

A collaboration between myself and my six year old daughter, Chloe.

 

Blue sky above the waterfall

Plummets to lagoon

Giraffes graze upon

The clifftop

In the sunny afternoon

Flora flourishes

All around

Giving life to fauna

Birds fly high

Across the sky

Fishes swim the water

Author's Note

Written for a contest by myself and my daughter Chloe

Reviews

[Wicahpi]

How adorable!! I love it :)
Give your daughter a big hug from me for participating!!
I love that children get involved with help of moms and dads.
Thank you for your entry into my Picture Poem This (24) contest.
Good luck to You & Chloe!!! Hope to see you both next round.
Peace n Light

[Desert Dreamer]

Your poem does well to describe the image and flows nicely and I love the rhyme and rhythm, making it fun to read.

[Millionth Muse]

What an enchanting and enduring piece. I think this is a lagoon that I wouldn't mind visiting, but I get the feeling that it only exists in the minds of you and your daughter. Very well done!

[brownie]

Wonderful imagery combined with your excellent writing make this one great.
It leaves me wanting to go into that picture...:)

[cest la vie]

Oh my Spence.
what a treasure for the time capsule. You and your daughter wrote a most beautiful poem..
Keep this someplace nice and safe.. Beautiful. And tell her the lady that lives near Disneyworld said god job!!!

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Congrats on your big win!

[Ourebro.]

Visual and relaxing.
So much detail in so little space.