TO MY BELOVED

You are every thing for me, I can't live a single day without you.

Loneliness I never felt

for day in and day out

you are with me, 

You live for me !

And so I have no life without you

The source of all my energy,

I do believe I can't stand upright

But for you to keep me straight

Concerned only about myself

 My deeds lead you to tragedies

Not once, but a series of them troubling you

Things unbearable, unpardonable,

The eyes- the beauty of your face

 Darkened by the hands black,

The wounds unhealed which I made

 Visible still on your prime parts !

Yet , no doubt , you love me;

The beauty once possessed , diminished,

Doubtful I am , how long you 'll nourish me. ! 

sayed thangal

Reviews

[Debbie_Philly]

Sounds like man in regrets for the actions against his beloved.... very well written and deep emotions felt !!

[SAYED THANGAL]

ok thanks, but my beloved is the nature

[Daffy]

Well, Sayed, this poem says a lot. Written by a man who is used to analysing his and others feelings methinks. In satisfying oneself, one cannot avoid hurting others....thus, do we think that we should have no satisfaction for ourselves? We would have no life. You understand others, and therefore any harm can only be minor and accepted by all parties. Hmmmm, I could rabbit on and on, but suffice to say, well done. A nice read.

[SAYED THANGAL]

thanks a lot, the cruelties of the ''written'' person is not towards an individual, but towards the nature

[Sami Khalil]

You could be describing nature...I sense feelings of hurt and disaapointments for what man is doing...Bravo........

[SAYED THANGAL]

ok, you are right, thanks

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)..................................

[Frieda P]

A bittersweet read, sounds as though she's devoted, we should never deliberately wound those we love...no wonder you have doubts.

[SAYED THANGAL]

I still love her, but she is not a woman with flesh and blood,..............

[Frieda P]

Not sure what that means exactly.............

[SAYED THANGAL]

shall I say ? ok, it is about the over exploitation upon nature and natural resources by humans.

[Frieda P]

Ahhhh, light bulb moment, makes perfect sense now!

[SANDEEP SHETTY]

Sir, i felt as if this poem was meant for me....this one rocks as usual!!!!!

[SAYED THANGAL]

thanks, an input to think in anther way

[Praveeta]

Emotions well portrayed. True love can withstand any hardship.

[SAYED THANGAL]

truly I am not speaking about a living individual, but some thing more than that,.......
thanks

[Praveeta]

Is it the soul? Just curious:)

[SAYED THANGAL]

You can say so, but I say not.

[TL Boehm]

the wounds unhealed which I made. there is a sadness to this the sadness we bring to others especially those we profess to love. Well written .

[SAYED THANGAL]

Of course I'm sad on what I did, but still doing ,................
thanks

[Vidya Bacchus]

I say that this is a wonderful tribute to you and your beloved.Words sometimes mean more than any gifts you can bring .Well penned sayed:)

[SAYED THANGAL]

go some more deep, then you can get what ''we'' are doing ,.........
thanks a lot

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome:)

[SAYED THANGAL]

what do you say about me and my beloved ?