MASTERY IN CREATION

See the surroundings, some thing special in almost every thing

Enough rain for one third land

From the clouds , the source -the sea.

The quantity varies -to scursity  ,

 Or over dosage - as to the area of the sea.

Hills, alternative, equalize the distribution,

Make vegetation lively.

Watch the waves , the back ward movements

Check the force of the speedy waves.

Birth and death paralise the numbers

No existence if one ceased.

The ready vegetation receives

Of what animals discharge ,

Opposite in the plants.

So accurate the distance of the sun,

The base of existence.

So dangerous , in both ways ,

If the position changes.

The salty water - the master digester,

Untold wealth in and out

Centre of hope of the multitude,

Still , no salty taste in the rain !

Sayed Thangal

Reviews

[Praveeta]

A pleasant read and write. It's always nice to read about nature.

[SAYED THANGAL]

hearty thanks for the feed back

[SAYED THANGAL]

hearty thanks for the feed back

[Praveeta]

You are welcome.

[Saddam]

Rain is a big gift of God, it is not bless one or two but about the whole earth and nature is on that...a very nice poem of rain...that so beautiful.

[SAYED THANGAL]

well read the poem, thanks. the creativity is always matchless and unique

[Saddam]

thank you very much dear friend and welcome.

[Sami Khalil]

"Untold wealth in and out




Centre of hope of the multitude,




Still , no salty taste in the rain !"

Rain can be annoyance to some people but it is a blessing and a wealth like you have noted...A wonderful write...:)..................

[SAYED THANGAL]

thanks for the feed back

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).................