the dragon's snack

damsel in distress
she waits for the armored knight
dragon wants a snack

Reviews

[Atthis Rose]

Oh,Oh you dropped the ball big on this one leo. The rules if you care fro them are not being adhered to . Just on concept with a big run on sentence:lines 1 and 2

[spunkyleo]

who needs rules? i just this poem poem cuz i was bored and sick. thanks for the review

[Atthis Rose]

A master once said. "Learn the rules and them forget them" my paraphrase

[Rita L. Sev]

Ha! A fun senryu - personally I always root for the dragon... Good write!

[spunkyleo]

thank you, and i also root for the dragon. *dragon club*