love rollercoaster

Love,
Is a rollercoaster,
It has its ups,
It has its downs,
You get together,
You ask out,
You get asked out,
You dump,
You get dumped,
You love,
You cherish,
Everything falls,
But in the end,
It all works out,
 

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[Faith]

i get your message in this poem completely, it is some what powerful, yet it lacks rhythm, and instead of constantly repeating the same words, 'you' and 'it' try using some more complex words, and a different format instead of just a list of words.

'but in the end, it all works out' ; the ending lines are my favorite because it is 100% true, love is hard but when it comes down to it, it's all worth it; the time you spend together quickly makes up for the aggravation.

thanks for sharing :]

Faith