whats wrong with me

A Poem by Scout

i hope i didn't already post this.

I should just stop
i should shut up
i've ruined it all
i can't hold on
it's all ending
everything around me crumbling
what is my problem
how can i be so cruel
so stupid
so naiive
i need help
i need strength
and courage
and love
my heart needs mending
to help me mend the hearts i've broken
whats wrong with me

© 2009 Scout

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SunShine Meadows

Aw i like it alot!! I like how the person's world is falling apart because they broke aprt someone elses. It makes this almost sweet yet sad...I really like it :)

Posted 16 Years Ago

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Added on September 5, 2009

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Scout

Mesa, AZ

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I love writing and reading. It is the best feeling to sit down and write out your feelings in poetry, or imagine a dream world and write a novel. I can not imagine not writing ever, it is like my oxyg.. more..