Forgive me

Unintentionally I may have hurt you

You don't even know it

but I feel so bad

I love you dearly

and I only want you to be happy

but I made a mistake

I have thought bad things

and said things you would

fall to pecies over if you heard

Please forgive me

I treasue your friendship more than anything

More than the perfect man for me

a thousand waves could not

weaken my love for you

Don't forget me

I never meant to do it

The boy means nothing

Reviews

[SunShine Meadows]

Awww!!!! this is so sweet and so sad. Its hard to confess the things that we've done wrong but this is really pretty and wonderfully done.

[Serend1p1ty]

A scenario we all fall into.
Doing something or saying something we regret.
& no matter how many times we do it, sometimes we just never seem to learn.
A lot of guilt is evident here. Guilt & shame.
The ending gives a nice twist. In one line, you explain the reasoning behind the entire poem. I like that, very clever.
A simple poem. But a confession does not require embellishment.

Yours truly,
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