anti-prince charming

Just to be able to sit and talk

for you to like me

and me to like you

To laugh at eachother

and laugh at ourselves

Share our darkest secrets

and not to judge

To cry in eachother's presence

with comfort and understanding

Speak our own opinions

with respect from each person

To shout when we have fights

but work through it all

To me that is love

Someone you feel

so comfortable around

Someone you can tell the most

embarrassing things

Someone you can debate with

and not feel like you're fighting

Someone you are close to

Not prince charming or

Robin Hood

Someone better than any superhero

An extraordinary person

A best friend

Reviews

[SunShine Meadows]

Haha this is soo good! These peoms you claim to pull "out of your butt" have been quite amazing! i wish i could do that and i'm jealous you have that skil ;) but really this is good!

[PaperHearts]

This was so sweet! I could definitely relate to the feelings that you expressed in your poem, and I agree with you fully. The line that stood out the most to me was 'Someone you can debate with and not feel like you're fighting'. This is so true, and I don't think that I really realised that until I read your poem!
There were two typos that I noticed. On the sixth line, you have written 'out', which should be 'our'. Also, on the second to last line, 'extrodinary' should be 'extraordinary'. :D
This was a really heartfelt and sincere poem! Nice write!
~PaperHearts