Sunset in the forest

Ok so its not really a story but its just like a passage ok so not really but i dont know what is. You decide.

I look all around. I see greens solf and wet from the morning dew. I look further up, i run my fingures over a hard surface, bumpy yet smooth. Colors white, brown, and black. My eyes sore higher, to new greens different sizes and shapes, now soft and smooth. Now they join the others, wispering in the wind. But nothing last forever, the wispering will soon queit. If i dare to venture even higher, i will see many different and varied colors. There are pinks and purples, orange and blues. It's a magical moment, untill the sun slides away, and the tall wisperers are now silent once more.

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[Larry Dyson]

I look all around.

I see greens soft and wet from the morning dew.

I look further up, I run my fingers over a hard surface.

Bumpy yet smooth.

Colors white, brown, and black.

My eyes soar higher, to new greens.

Different sizes and shapes, now soft and smooth.

Now they join the others, whispering in the wind.

But nothing lasts forever, the whispering will soon quiet.

If I dare to venture even higher, I will see many different and "varied"?colors.

There are pinks and purples, orange and blues.

It's a magical moment, until the sun slides away, and the tall whisperers are now

....silent once more.

[Larry Dyson]

many different and "varied" colors...prolly?

[dreaming dame]

Beautiful. :) Love your description.

[Kiari Sabon]

a place of peace i love it

[Yina]

Wow that's beautiful. Love your descriptions!

[Just Me]

Wow.... Lots of imagery. I like it. There r a few spelling mistakes but seeing as it's u I wont point them out. Overall it was a good write.