On The Shore

An image was born--the fence contest

The sun hit the fence with a shining brightness,
I smiled as I continued to work with a smile of kindness
I had finished off work for the day,
Then knew it was a day short of being completely my way
The bungalow on the shore was what we had dreamed of,
I made sure to hold true to my word of love
The next day came as I finished up our dream,
The look on your face was priceless, so it seemed
We now had our home with a nice fence and a view,
Even if we did not have this new house on the shore just simply being with you
Would be every man's dream as well as woman's that had come true.

Reviews

[ScarlettTheDreamer]

Good. A poem with a view! I like it!

[Tate Morgan]

I think I would like that

[Black Cat Fever]

This has a dreamy feel to it. Having a dream house by the sea would be very dreamy anyway especially sharing it with someone you love.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Interesting piece, good luck in the contest! A dream house by the sea? With my luck a hurricane would come along. lol

[Ruth]

Wonderful imagery hon
A great entry!
xx

[Fallacy Pharmacy]

A gorgeous, very sweet poem. I always pick up on the flow and the rhyming in poems that I read, and I must admit that both the flow & the rhyming is immense in this poem. Some beautiful imagery created here, too. Well done!

[zombiikillah666]

the new house on the shore would have rocked though....lol...
i really like this....sweet and sincere. (:
great write. :D

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem is beautiful. Your words are true. It is who you are with that make the world around you better. A perfect ending to a very good poem.
Coyote