Him and Her

11-2-2010

A helpless woman in distress,
A man that wandered by
A needy girl that made a mess,
A man that simply sighed
A wanting chick that did not know,
A man that knew too well
A craving lady of love very much so,
A man that came back from hell
A distraught kid of the female kind,
A man that took her hand
A relieved broad as his kiss was divine,
A man that carried her through the sand
A chick-a-dee who let love in,
A man that gave her his soul
A female who now knew what and where love had been,
A man that was redeemed by their love as it was his goal.

Reviews

[GunMetal]

Nice pacing. Short enough to keep the repetition from becoming too weary, and just long enough to tell a story. Nice.

[Black Cat Fever]

A story of love healing, and I think it can if its real love.

[Peter Joseph Swanson]

Cool poem and done so well, with such a hip flow to it all!

[Tate Morgan]

We men all need redemption to be sure
Hope alls well for you stacy
Tate

[Marie Harrison]

Cool poem.

[Zackery Alan Daley]

Modern poetic justice. Job well done