Proof
A Poem by Kristin
I want To live ,Be living proof That everything Will be okay. I want To die Silent reminder That nothing Was okay.
© 2014 Kristin
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Conflicting points that both have a philosophical logic to it, and a definite portrayal of an unstable intellect debating . . . Well done.
Posted 12 Years Ago
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An excellent two-sided conflict. Very appropriate for the month of January - as in Janus the two-faced god.
Posted 12 Years Ago
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This is very philosophical. Excellent job!
Posted 12 Years Ago
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Added on January 5, 2014
Last Updated on January 5, 2014
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