Proof

Proof

A Poem by Kristin

I want

To live

,Be living proof

That everything

Will be okay.

I want

To die

Silent reminder

That nothing

Was okay.

© 2014 Kristin


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Conflicting points that both have a philosophical logic to it, and a definite portrayal of an unstable intellect debating . . . Well done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


An excellent two-sided conflict. Very appropriate for the month of January - as in Janus the two-faced god.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is very philosophical. Excellent job!

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on January 5, 2014
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Kristin
Kristin

Atlanta, GA