Gone

I want you to break me
Shake me
Don't try to fake me
Don't even wake me

I want you to kill me
Don't know where I will be
I need another pill see
Hope I don't wake up still me

Maybe this'll help me pass out
Hope I can't feel anythig and black out
After all this I won't back out
I keep hearing all these wack shouts

Perfect
Breaking
Broken
Gone

Reviews

[Owlgirl]

Wow! Awesome job! I love the ending!

[Tai Ryens]

I enjoyed this, but, to be honest, it isn't your best. The ending was perfect, and I admired that part of the piece the most. You have lots of potential, always remember!