Fourteen

this need a lot of work, but i hope you get the message im trying to give!

Take a slow breath
As you make way through the front doors.
It's your first day at a new school

So you try to make some friends

While trying to stay out of the others’ way.

It's your freshman year
So you're stuck in here for the next 4 years of your life.
Hoping one of those Abercrombie dressing boys
Will come up to you and ask for your name.
 

When you're fourteen, and he tells you he loves you
No doubt you’ll believe him.
But when you're fourteen
You think there’s nothing to worry.
Close your eyes,
Because it’s life before you know who you’re going to be..

At fourteen

You sit next to a girl named Nikki in Biology class.
Soon enough you're making conversation with her

And now you‘re her best friend.

Mocking at the other girls
Who they think they're the best thing around.
We pretty much laughed till’ we cried.
 

 

Next thing you know your on a date with Mike the Senior boy.

Yes he has a car
And you feel like your flying.

You know he's that one
And you're dancing around

When you come home.
Because your first kiss made your stomach flip around.
But in your life you'll do things
Much greater than the boy on the soccer team
She didn't know it at fourteen.

 

You really thought you'd marry him

But one day that all changed.

You gave everything to the guy

Who changed his mind..

Author's Note

gahhh this need a lot of work!
suggestions and comments would be lovely!
favor will be returned :)

Reviews

[Chaya Prasad]

i like this alot. i can relate but i'm only in junior high. you can never believe a guy when they tell you they love you. guys have told me this and it always ended up a lie. i'm only 13. but i would like to ask if this is your first time writing a poem. i have written many but it's just going to take a while to post. Keep Writing :)