alone

alone

A Poem by starmozie

The darkness envelopes her,

like a shroud.

No moon tonight to light her path.

she shivers

 and draws her sweater  tighter around her shoulders.

 She quickens her pace

glancing nervously

behind '

ITS THE SAME THING EVERY NIGHT

walking home alone

always

ALONE.

© 2008 starmozie


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Nice

Posted 18 Years Ago
It strikes me as a good beginning. You've built up tension by her nervousness. It seems like there should be more. Thanks for joining The Lotus Eaters group.

Posted 18 Years Ago


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starmozie
starmozie

sutton, Canada



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I am 45 years old and I live in sutton, quebec.I wrote my first story at 10. I have a degree in creative writing r=from Concordia university in montreal. Over the years, kids and life have managed to .. more..