Maldek

This is a poem about a fictional place.

Choked with red dust

Stones rain from the sky

Robots do our jobs

People would rather die

Islands float in the sky

Crystalline life forms

An artificial moon

upon domed cities

Reviews

[Green]

I hope you don't mind me saying so, but this place seems terrible; nevertheless, it does seem like an interesting setting for a story... hmmm. It does sort of make me think of a civilization on Mars though, not sure why but it probably has something to do with the red dust. This fictional place of yours has intrigued me.

[Stephanie M]

thanks for your insight