i knew...

rough around the edges

i knew we were done

when you said to go

i knew we were done

when you called me a hoe

 

but nothing oh so bleak

can turn me to a freak

if all you say

is to tell me to go

Author's Note

I am new.

Reviews

[Jovilious]

Wow, the emotion is real. You have raw and pure talent that's rare these days. 'I knew' oozes pain and toxic love for something harmful. Bravo