Stain of Blue

For the "Eyes" Contest.

Piercing... hypnotic

Eyes are windows to my soul

Is my soul stained blue?

 

Reviews

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Congrats on your great winning haiku

[Rosee]

I love your page! so colorful and your haikus are like no other :)

[Gheeneil]

Blue is a universal color and it looks so comforting. The sky, the ocean---the nature---are so soothing. Blue just brings peace. So, if one's soul has the shade of blue (figuratively speaking), that's good to know. Perhaps, the eyes reflect the color of one's soul. Hm, lemme get a mirror to see which color mine is. :) I enjoyed this.

[An owl on the moon]

Such powerful imagery that creates a setting and deep mood in so few words. Amazing piece!

[Eldee]

Awesome haiku :)
You are one of those authors who has the ability to put something large into few words and I envy you for it. You are also one of those authors who actually understands the writing of a haiku- so another thumbs up. I loved the imagery of this, as well as the thoughts it provokes. Good job mon amie!

[Crazy Cat Man]

me gusta mucho
este haiku es bueno
Keep up the great work

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Woah that is one hot haiku... love it.