Nightmare

Contest: Chofu You

 

 

What is a nightmare?

Dark dream.

Intensity makes you scream!

Wake up breathing fast,

Don't fret.

You'll have another dream yet!

Author's Note

A chofu has a 5-2-7-5-2-7 syllable pattern. I thought I'd try it out!

Reviews

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Oh this is a fabulous entry... you really used your skills well in trying this style... what I also love is the underline message I see here... if you don't succeed try again.

[Kayla]

Wow!! This was amazing! Those few words are very strong! I can feel what you're portraying in this poem!! I really liked reading it!!

[Crazy Cat Man]

A very good chofu. I see you are definitely experimenting with different styles. thats good. it keeps the mind sharp. :) great job