First Didn't Last

For the Limerexes contest!

 

I once dated this boy named Phil

We were happy as could be until

He broke up with me

And then switched teams

Though my heart holds a place for him  still

Reviews

[Through the Gateway]

Oh, wow, Steph! This was a good tongue-in-cheek piece. Very well written.

[Marie Anzalone]

Then he switched teams? LOL I know a guy that happened to... twice! There's not much you can really say to that, is there?

This was a fun romp- thanks for sharing!

[Bud]

The first seldom lasts, but it does clear a path for one to take. Hoping the next will last, not making the same mistakes. But are they mistakes or merely lessons in the learning of life? Great piece!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Oh that was great...very witty and fun.

[An owl on the moon]

Quite the moving limerick! Your form and flow are simply perfect. Thank you for sharing a world of thoughts and feelings in the midst of these five wondrous lines.