Intermission

Limerexes contest entry 2.

 

 

We were never "me and you"

But you still tore my heart in two

Just leading me on

Until I was gone

You broke me and hid the glue

Reviews

[Alyssa]

The way you made the font is an amazing way of portraying how low the person feels.. how small and fragile... I love how you did that. And i love the last line, good way of puting that, you are so creative. I like how short it is too, makes the reader linger and think a bit after. Nice :)

[alyssa]

such llittle words show so much emotion!! This peom is well writen and i felt what you wrote! GREAT WORK! keep it up!!

[An owl on the moon]

There is such a depth of history and painful experience expressed through these five lines... Brilliantly done!

[Through the Gateway]

This was a good piece, Steph. Full of heartbreak and silent questioning.

[Purpleoreo13]

It short but amazingly powerful good job

[Aekmy]

(: I love this very much. Great job.

-Mary

[Bud]

More powerful than the sting of a bee, that is what I see! So much, so little... Well done, Steph! Well done, indeed!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Again you nailed it... great limerick... I know it should be sad but I can't help but smile at the flare you put into your words.