Marine

For Arron <3

My brave and strong Marine

All of my heart is with you

Run as fast as you can

Imagine that finish line

No obstacle you can’t overcome

Everyone knows you can do it…

　

                         

 

 

 

                  …especially me.

Reviews

[BjH]

do it... ...do what?
build a hospital? maybe get food to some hungry folk down on their luck? or... maybe just plain old get some?
yes, there truely is very little those marines can't do.
a poem so cute in it's layout it could be bloodstain on underwear.

[J Todd Underhill]

Wow, being raised by a Marine, and having a Marine as a best friend I have to say this really caught my eye. I didn't expect an acrostic poem, but for as acrostics go this one is good. Semper Fi, and thank your Marine for his service to our country and protecting our right to freedom of speech and expression

[Amit Parmessur]

Cute piece...

[Chris]

and don't dismiss... "Semper FI" young miss.

Its who he and we ever are - part and heart.

Take care
Chris

[D. Pesek]

This is a great little acrostic poem. I like the last part in italics, it adds a lot of personality to the piece

[MiaIntheSkywithDiamonds]

Go get 'em, Arron :)

[He@ther!]

Aww that's so sweet!!:) I love it, great write!:))

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Your words are full of love and motivation... nothing more uplifting then that... very nicely done.