Scent of Death

Another product of my creative writing class.

Colorful, sweet, intoxicating

Beautiful on the surface

Its true nature concealed like an iceberg

Roots stretching deep into the earth

Hiding its real self

A flower, yes. Just not so sweet

Death lurks beneath delicate petals

Disguised as white innocence

Curiosity will lead to your demise

The flora claims you for eternity 

Don’t be frightened as you fade into silence

Look through darkened vision in amazement

That the lily tricked another simple soul 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A very nice description of the scent of death. I like the use of flowers and the gentle journey described in the poem. Last line made this poem complete.
"Look through darkened vision in amazement
That the lily tricked another simple soul "
Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[J Todd Underhill]

I like this, I am wondering what grade you got on this piece I would give it an A but I am an easy judge, and the feel of the piece is a winner

[The Winter Grey]

This is a great piece; it oozes symbolism and style... the flow is absolutely effortless. Kudos.

[Aekmy]

Oooh, this is quite lovely! I could just read it over and over again. You've done a wonderful job with word play, word choice, various methods of writing. Simply wonderful.

[An owl on the moon]

There is an elegance to your poison... and in beauty you confess the darkness that lies underneath.. waiting to devour... Powerful poetry! (You do have class, and I'm thrilled you do!)