Time gets physical

My greatest enemy-Time.

-Time gets physical- 

9/10/14

The counting of a beating heart per second is the truest form of physical expression for Time itself. 

When Time gets physical 

dreamers suffer most.

Missing their moment while

Immortals whisper in legends..

Invisibly touching us like the wind. 

-Stone Fox

Author's Note

My thoughts on Time

Reviews

[Lizardo]

An Amazing and enjoyable poem, I like the line: ''When Time gets physical, the dreamers will suffer the most.''
Beautiful Writting, Great work!

[Stone Fox]

Thank you! I'm glad that line spoke out to you! This was one of those poems that already knew how to be written. I appreciate the review and the friend request! -Stone

[Einstein Noodle]

i love this .. my cup of tea .. deeply reflective in a free poetic expression .. very nice says i! so glad to be getting to know you
E.

[Stone Fox]

Well hopefully we will be able to review more of each other's work. I'm so glad you vam relate it and understand. Thank you! -Stone

[Einstein Noodle]

this especially brings it home:
"while the Immortals whisper through the legends like wind. " but all of it is stellar says i! .. dreamers suffer most .. great stuff!
E.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

You put quite a turn on things with your words!!!
I loved it!!!
:)

[Stone Fox]

That sir, is a very gigantic complement and i appreciate it! I try to simplify and complicate my words at the same time. Like a double edged sword. -Stone

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Well congrats!!! You are a success in that. :) :)

[Arsh]

Your words've got the depth inside your own thoughts. Loved your beauty! Keep it up!