Hell

a lover's kiss that bleeds into a stinging twist 

unravles the soul disconnecting all physical bliss.

a sickness of the heart that discards your vacant shell

proves Love is the most docile prey of all for a special kind of hell.

-Stone Fox

Reviews

[wordsofheart]

Unique,nice and deep.These three words sum up the reason why your poem is very well-written.Good Work!

[W R Stowe]

Love can swing either way heaven or hell nice flow

[KWP]

Yes that's real and raw and just how love goes really weather we want it to or not xx

[Jamie]

So deep and powerful! Love it!

[Stone Fox]

Thank you so much! I'm greatful for whatever input you send my way, hope i can hold on to the power in the words lol. -Stone

[Jamie]

You are very welcome Stone :) Feel free to review my work :)

[Einstein Noodle]

wow! excellent says i .. comes from a deep well .. wish i had such a gift .. very well done says i! totally gives me pause to reflect .. well done!
E.

[Stone Fox]

again you are too kind! But i am so glad there are people out there who want to read it and enjoy it! -Stone

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Beautiful!!!
Short complete and effective!!
I loved it!!!
Amazing presentation too.
:)

[Stone Fox]

Thank you so much! Sadly they all get much longer from here. Trying to work on short poems. -Stone

[Pushkar Prabhat]

You are welcome!!!
Why sorten them, unless they are verbose.
All the best! Would love to read them.
Anyways happy new year!!!!
:) :)