Yesterdays Goodbyes

Sounds of yesterdays goodbyes

The euphony in the breeze
reminds me of what used to be.
Murmurous whisper is a constant emotion,
a cantabile sound of
yesterdays goodbyes.

My breath blows against
the celestial horizon
where tears cascade against
the somberness of my
broken heart.

An exuberance of memories
evanesce in my mind,
and plays pianissimo notes
upon lovelorn lips
that once knew the taste of you,
but now knows the sound of
yesterdays goodbyes.

I commemorate your face
in every waking day,
yearning to feel your amicableness.
My body is pensive,
and cries atrocious sound of
yesterdays goodbyes.

Author's Note

Tell me what you think.

Reviews

[✒☁Chau Mad..]

I enjoy reading it alot.

Greeaat write.

[Not here]

This was really descriptive, and i liked it alot. great write

[KAREN]

Thank you very much!

[Valentine]

I really like the second grouping but agree with the previous reader. Sometimes less is more as not all are college educated. Valentine

[KAREN]

Thank you!

[Trace]

I liked the poem but found the use of all the big words to be a bit of overkill.
I feel like I need to get a dictionary out to decipher the meaning of all of the ambiguous words to insure I get the full meaning of the emotions you are trying to express.

Still enjoyed the poem.

Trace

[KAREN]

Thank you, and don't worry I did have to use a dictionary. Just wanted to try something different.

[Tate Morgan]

What a longing feel this has the picture evokes a thought of the western shores of ireland where so many of our ancestors set off for the new world Never to return

[KAREN]

Thank you for your nice words.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

The mixture of emotion and magic here is refreshing well done

[KAREN]

Thank you!

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

Very gentle and enjoyable read-sorrow is complimented by muses of nature and sensations rather than a muse of angst.

[KAREN]

Thank you!

[Ruth]

This is so smooth and radiant...delicate and soul reaching, tender and yet bold, beauty! xo

[KAREN]

Thank you, Dear friend!

[Sami Khalil]

I love it. A professional write with the somberness of emotions. Excellent...:)..........

[KAREN]

Thank you for the review!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)...............

[Tina Kline]

I like this a lot. We've all experienced loss in our lives.
It's painful and bittersweet.
Amazing poem!!!!

[KAREN]

Thank you so much!

[Tina Kline]

You are most welcome.