When Rain Falls Like.....

Lovers in the rain!

Translucent whispers

Dances in hues of memories

While luminous passion glistens

Rhythmic silk falls like rain

Aspirations sing in the depth of two hearts

Wrapping reflections in echoes

As smiles breathe yesterday's dreams

Pictorial rays hum a harmonious tune

When whimsical rapture entwines them as one

Emotions fall like rain

Imagery buds around like sweet smelling roses

And profound time shadows them

Because their love falls like rain

 

Author's Note

What do you think?

Reviews

[Art Sun]

A very passionate poem
I'm sure somewhere these thoughts a being created...

Nice...

[M. J. Smith]

There! you've done it again. In my youth, I dated a girl who loved poetry. She taught me that love. And before long, we would spend hours just reading to each other or sharing what we had written. This so like one of hers. I could hear her voice again. Do you know? There is a touch of fairy magic in your soul. I'm sure of it. Such beauty! Thank you for sharing it with the world.

[KAREN]

Wow! Thank you for reading!

[M. J. Smith]

The pleasure and honor were all mine. And you are most welcome.

[Coyote Poetry]

I adored the poetry my dear friend. The poem took me in, and I wanted more. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry. I did enjoy.
Coyote

[Trace]

I really like this poem.. wonderful read.

Trace.

[KAREN]

Thank you for reading!

[Sami Khalil]

A very good description of two persons that found the answers in romance and many other aspirations. Soaked harmoniously.

[KAREN]

Thank you very much!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome .

[Kent Rawski]

For starters I think it's magnificent like watching a spider spin its web your words bring your emotions to thoughts no other reviews I'll add my second

[Kent Rawski]

I think no reviews. Thats crazy your imagery is rapturous

[KAREN]

Thank you so much!