Calm In My Heart

A peaceful place!

       Calm in my heart as I breathe in this place,

    There's inner harmony in the mist of peace

    Emblematic scenery filled with abstract grace

    Calm in my heart as I breathe in this place

    Solitude dances and the sunset embrace,

    Life takes on a brand-new lease

    Calm in my heart as I breathe in this place

    There's inner harmony in the mist of peace

    

     

     

Author's Note

Trying a Triolet poem!

Reviews

[Betty Hermelee]

I think you did a good job with the Triolet .....a lot of repetition but a very soft serene setting. There is nothing greater than inner peace ....and I'm glad you can find it. Many of us worry about world events that may trickle down to us in some way. But all of us should at some moment in our busy lives, find inner peace.
Nice write.
Best, Betty

[KAREN]

Thank you!

[red93]

Nice use of language within a formal setting. Calmness and Inner Peace - two things much sought after in the Modern World.

[KAREN]

Thank you!

[Chris Shaw]

I felt myself s!owing down as I read these lines. Calmness is a state of mind I enjoy. These days it is hard to find. I found it here. Nicely composed.

Chris

[KAREN]

Thank you!

[John the Baptist]

Has the sound of an inner experience rather than a physical location. Such states are usually reached by deep relaxation or meditation techniques.

[KAREN]

Thank you!

[Sami Khalil]

A new form with an old, true and tested methods of finding peace and calm within the storms of life. You are expanding your horizon and ours. That is what I love about this place. We all learn from each other and inspire each other.

[KAREN]

Thank you for the nice review!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome....

[Sami Khalil]

"Calm in my heart as I breathe in this place
Solitude dances and the sunset embrace"

[William Michael Reeves]

A triolet? Oh boy! I just did a bunch of lessons and my brains about to burst. Now you just added to my knowledge. As I read this I was thinking it was a form of some kind. Thanks for mentioning it in notes. I really like that emblematic line in the mist of peace. Putin must have missed that cloud of mist. He needs a dose!

[KAREN]

Wow! Thanks!!