My Heart Bleeds

Falling out of love!

   

 Broken heart

 Annihilated 

 Void of life 

 A puzzle

 lying next to my lost soul

 Bleeding liquid fear

 Hollow pain

 A gateway for tears

 Bitterness

 Misery

 Desperate for your sweet love

 Empty without you

 Depression

 An ocean of dread

 Deluged mind

 Graphic gloom

 I wear despair as fashion

 Yearning for your touch

 Incomplete

 Nonfunctional life

 Chaotic

 Rampantly

 Untamed emotions run away

 I'm dead without you

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Shadorma poem!

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

" Desperate for your sweet love
Empty without you

Depression
An ocean of dread"

[Sami Khalil]

Wow! Very intense and powerful. It is hard to be missing the one night on a white horse. Never heard of a Shadorma poem but will check. Pic is effective too.

[KAREN]

Thank you so much!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome Karen.

[Betty Hermelee]

A very sad poem, dedicated to a lost love; depression hits hard, a desperate feeling of emptiness, very well expressed with strong, emotional words...I like "I wear despair as fashion", perfectly fit into this poem of complete desolation....well done!
Best, B

[KAREN]

Thank you!

[Betty Hermelee]

You're very welcome!

[William Michael Reeves]

That was really good! 'I wear despair as fashion' should be the line of the day. Shedorma? I'll look it up unless you would be kind enough to describe it.

[KAREN]

Thank you!
6-line stanza poem.
line one 3 syllables
line two 5
line three and four has 3 syllables
line five 7 and line six 5

[Chris Shaw]

It can certainly seem that way if we lose someone who means everything. My granddaughter is wearing a coat of gloom at the moment following a recent breakup. It is painful to see, but I am sure the blackness will lift and she will see colour again soon. A full on emotional write and penned well. I appreciated the form Karen.

Chris

[KAREN]

Thank you for your kind review!