What We Are

The beginning of life with someone!

Knowing you is special

Is loving me the same?

Soon we will do this

Someday we'll have our first kiss

 

 

Many people do this

And I hope we will

Realizing your the one

Realizing we belong together

You and I will marry

 

 

Beginning life with you

And never looking back

Because we love each other

You and I will have a baby

 

Forever is what we are

And the three of us make one

My days are filled with happiness

Is your life full too?

Love holds us together

You and I and baby makes a family

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

For all the love birds out there!

Reviews

[Mark]

I don't want to be a wet blanket, or to say anything discouraging,
but I do not share the opinion of the majority of the reviewers of
this poem. It seems like a twelve-year-old's journal entry, rather
than an adult's prophecy. But thus far in my reading, this is the exception, and not the rule! Keep on pluggin"!

[Brad]

finding THAT ONE, there is no other feeling like it, but never being able to be with THAT ONE, that's an ache like a cancerous tumour killing one slowly

[An owl on the moon]

This was so very beautiful and uplifting, spreading out dreams like a banquet.. May it be so... may life be filled with everlasting love like this!

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

sweet little poetic gem of straightforward honest writing~

[ब्र&#..]

This is such lovely, and sweet poem! i love this very much! - Härlig dikt ( lovely poem)

[Goodbye]

Very. very sweet poem!

[youngwriter222]

Wow, the future holds many surprises to come! This is a beautiful poem full of many wonders.

[Claude]

What a beautiful, upbeat perspective. The undercurrents are full of hope and faith. It was wonderful to think about. Thanks

[SpokenWord]

Having someone so special that you can see a future like this is beautiful. One day at a time works for me, however it is a great write as it feels you are talking to the readers, we can feel the power of your words and imagine how it would have an affect on us.

[InkSlinger]

Sometimes these type of writes work... I honestly felt like you were speaking to me, sending me your feelings in the form of a letter... Usually a tricky task, but I think you pulled this off..