Opposite Girl

On and off relationship!

You think you give me pleasure,

make my life adventurous.

 

You think you're attentive,

but all you do is neglect my feelings.

 

You think you're humorous,

you're not funny at all.

 

You think you have extravagant taste,

if you did you would love me for me.

 

You think you make me happy,

I'm sad all the time.

 

You think you lavish me in love,

confident I'll never leave you.

 

WRONG!

 

You make me feel like an opposite girl,

you're in

you're out

You don't love me enough to make up your mind.

 

You make me feel like an opposite girl,

you love me

no, you hate me

I know which one it is, you think I don't.

 

You make me feel like an opposite girl,

beautiful

wait, you're ugly

Delicate. feminine, delicious that's me!

 

You want me to be an opposite girl,

here it goes.

I want you gone, not to stay.

I want you far, not near.

 

I've seen your back side more than your front side anyways,

GOOD-bye!

 

 

 

Author's Note

Hope you like, just let me know!

Reviews

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

now this is a solid dose of reality served straight up~

[Julie Beth]

i loved this and i can completely relate to this great job :)

[Brad]

whoah, that was an ice cold slap in the face...and i loved it..hahaah

[sarah]

Wow! I can relate! amazing work!

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

Very true, amazing job!

[JanieB]

If this is true, the get rid!

[JulieNorell]

This is true for ALOT of people! Its very hrd to deal with someone who thinks they are perfect when really they are the opposite of what you want! Good Job!

[SusanB]

This is so true for many people, me included. It's funny people that treat others this way always think they are funny, or treat you nice, they never see the truth about themselves.

Well written. I've lived this myself, so really spoke to me.

[SpokenWord]

Don't you just love a yo-yo relationship, just when you think they are gone for good they return again. I like how you gave examples then rejected them in the opposite. Nice writing.

[Mason]

low blow! this is fabulous in the most dangerous way. the words cut through me, almost intimidating. well done!