Entwined Love

Hand in hand,

holding on to one another,

consumed with lust and desire.

Our passion is awakened by the love we have for each other.

 

Lip to lip,

kissing one another,

unable to keep our feelings at bay.

We continually grow together.

 

Eye to eye,

we stare at one another,

not needing words to express our love.

Our relationship is enchanting, magical.

 

Ear to ear,

listening to one another,

boasting about the love we have.

Never turning a deaf ear.

 

Heart to heart,

locked together forever.

We threw away the key.

Our blood pumps as one blood flow,

our hearts beats as one.

 

Hand in hand

Lip to lip

Eye to eye

Ear to ear

Heart to heart

Never to be separated,

together forever.

Author's Note

I don't know if this is a good write, tell me what you think!

Reviews

[Jamie S.]

This is better than most writings I see on wedding and anniversary cards. You have a way with romantic words, I love reading this type of writing but havent dabbled with writing it myself. Great little write, thank you for sharing somthing so sweet and personal :)

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

beautiful I would use awakened here but other than that it is wonderful!

[SpitfireGrrrl]

This is magical.. and proves that there IS still romance in this world - that it can be achieved. Thank you!

[Ladysue]

An impeccable flow to this amazingly beautiful romantic poetry...much enjoyed...

[Kelley]

I like it a lot and I think this is how true love should be.
Great write thanks for sharing.

Kelley

[The Dudeman (Kenneth T)]

You don't know if it's a good write? Of course it's a good write!

[SilentLullabies]

So sweet! I love it!

[Brad]

intimacy can be so enthralling and intoxicating...by the read above...you've drank from the same bottle

[Jonathan De Elvira]

I think this was very sweet...and I love it because...I can't write a proper love poem..lol,
it feels good to read this..thanks..