Symbols Of Love

Things that causes you to love a person!

Your love

that lives deep in my

heart:

Like the blood pumping through its  valves.

Your kisses

that wet my lips:

Like the early morning dew.

Your smile

that melts my soul:

Like the flame of a candle.

Your eyes

that watch over

me:

Like the angels above.

Your arms

that hold me

tight:

Like the wedding ring on my finger.

Your voice

that whispers in my

ear:

Like soft music playing.

Your promises

that you never

break:

Like the beating of my

heart.

Author's Note

Trying a new set up! Tell me what you think?

Reviews

[iamcarolfierce]

I love this. Made me remind of someone I love so much! This clearly states what I am feeling whenever he does things like that. It's like you're speaking on behalf of me. Very well done!

[Jibey]

A pleasing romantic piece... well shaped, with a sense of incantation, a magic spell that refledcs the intensity of feelings in the writing...

[Loner]

A true portrayal of love and passion ...... loved it from the start till
the end , awesome write i am shelfing it right away !

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful story of love and desire in the poem. Each additional line making the poem stronger and giving the poem reason and purpose. A very good ending to a outstanding poem of love.
Coyote

[Nobody.]

beautiful and flowing and (if you'll excuse my natural country boy brashness) just sexy as hell. really felt this one. felt like it flowed straight from your heart. well done! great poetry!
Cheers!
R.G.

[InkSlinger]

Nicely composed, good flow.. I liked this..

[Tina Kline]

I love it. A wonderful love poem, it works perfectly.

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

What a lovely thought..!!! Lovely way of expression..!!!!

[Undying Glory]

i must agree, this was so heartfelt and profound, real beautiful too. this was real sweet writing here, and i sure am liking this new format. i know i'm such a science nerd but i think it''ll be better writing "Like the blood pumping through my veins" or something like that since valves are attached to the veins and the heart. this was great work. awesome!

[Nothing Personal]

yah I like the format..It blends in nicely with this poem because you are trying to write one with different ideas based on a single theme of love..As always, I admire your romanticism, it is warm and genuine and your lines and ideas always reflect that..I really enjoyed the kiss analogy with early morning dew..I am kind of sucker for that kind of phrases..Thanks