Rise and Shine

Darkness scatters loneliness.

Morning light spreads

new beginnings,

while shadows dance around

us.

Author's Note

Tell me what you think!

Reviews

[trainwreck]

This is really interesting to ponder. Great job!

[KAREN]

Thank you!

[Peony]

What a thought provoking piece. So random, yet not. A wonderful write to consider through different emotional views.

[Samuel Dickens]

The morning light presents us with a day of possibilities, and we greet it with hope in our hearts.

[Judy Ponceby]

Beautiful :)

[JanieB]

I like this. Simple, yet effective.

[Tina Kline]

This is spectacular imagery. Very clever and creative way to describe what is so true!

[Crayon]

Lovely. Its short and sweet, but packs a lot more meaning in than is found in a lot of longer poems. well done!

[Julie Beth]

short and sweet haha great job i loved it :)

[Gone]

Sounds like my ride to work in the morning :)."morning light preads new beginnings" I love that thought. Every morning being a new beginning. Cool!

[Valentine]

Short and right to the point..Kathie