Now I Lay Me Down To Sleep

For the creative poetry group!

She lays on a bed of nonexistent dreams,

watches the pendulum move back and forth.

Sliver moon shines reflective memories

across her weary face.

Hypnos flies over head,

leaving a feeling of cosmos.

She fades into a hypnotic state

as mysterious eyes peer down.

Slumber finally drifts in on

a midnight breeze.

Author's Note

What do you think?

Reviews

[Misty Blue Eyes]

Very well done

[KAREN]

Thanks so much!

[Angel Bluestocking]

i love it. giving yourself to blissful sleep. hehe~ soo nice!

[Wolf's Dark Song]

Surrendering to the overly fantastic world of dreams. Very beautifully done. Very enjoyable too!

[Becky C Strukamp]

Like gently entering slumber with peace of mind, and it all happened with ease, lovely write. Beautifully penned.

[Tina Kline]

Very mysterious, rather relaxing and very very sleepy. Nicely done!

[?]

I feel like Im getting sleepy. Very smooth and gentle and easy on the mind.

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If HYpnos can't take you there - nobody can!..lovely write

[Raven Starhawk]

A lovely sentiment. No it is more like a beautiful dream that I linger in.

[WindSong]

Dreamy! It's such a light and mystical type of poem with a whimsical flare that is just so very appealing to the senses. Totally delightful to read!

WindSong

[Poetic Beauty]

I love this tale of Hypnos and how mysterious and magical dreams and slumber can be. We as people know very little about sleep.