Journey Of The Heart

For the creative poetry group.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I know what I want

You're not it

Repugnant personality

Sinister smile

Your ominous ways

Deception full of lies

Ghastly terror when you're around

 

I want rhyme and reason

An enchanted affair

Shadows making love at dusk

Sensuous caress in a magic touch

Love that haunts my days and nights

 

I need peace and harmory

Romantic treasures in a smile

Unwinding path that leads to fullfillment

Sweet phrases whispered in my ear

Expressions of unity

 

I expect calm surrender

Passion that flows tenderly

Sapphire eyes swimming in joy

Silky creamy skin entwined with mine

Inspiring devotion and creativity

 

I desire transparent love

One I can see right through

Where two hearts abode

In perfect imagery

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Tell me what you think!

Reviews

[Alicia Schroeder]

Beautiful depiction of how you want love to be, each one of us has a hunger inside and to be able to know what drives you is sometimes what makes you feel whole inside.. Great poem

[Loner]

Beautiful portrayal of love....

[Michael X]

beautifully crafted and meaningful, nice job!

[Wolf's Dark Song]

I like this. Love is all powerful and its what we all need....real love, that is.

[Enigma]

Ah. Beautiful. About the two contrasting images of love. Keep it up.

[Tina Kline]

We all know what we need and should strive for that instead of settling for anything else. Less chance of being in a happy healthy relationship. You did a wonderful job on this write.

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and hopeful poem of love. The artwork made the poem complete. Love need to be kind and very good. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

An amazing poem constructed masterfully, a joy to read :)

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

"Sapphire eyes swimming in joy

Silky creamy skin entwined with mine"

Those are my favorite lines here!