The Calm After The Storm

 

 

 

A beaming rainbow evanesces

behind the clouds

Rain drops like scintillant

wishing coins,

And the sun reflects to the

dampened ground

Where all creatures stare

in reverence.

Author's Note

Tell me what you think!

Reviews

[Alicia Schroeder]

Beautiful :)

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Beautiful. Short and sweet. Nice word play.

As the sun feeds all, and makes us breathe. Wonderful write dear! Short yet so much complexity totally well said!

[Audrey Howitt]

Just lovely! My favorite line--

Rain drops like scintillant

wishing coins,

[Eagle Cruagh]

You have painted the beauty following
the rain.
It flows beautifully, the imagery is
captivating and your imagination rocks.
In just a few words you have created a
masterpiece.

Thank you,
---- John

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

so lovely!

[Wolf's Dark Song]

I can just see all the animals staring up at the sky grateful after a dark and dreary storm. They don't forget where their life comes from, the heavens and the rains and the sun and so on. This is very beautiful!

[Raven Starhawk]

Everyone has to pass rites of passage. For me this was a poem about that special greatness. I might have had it all wrong and I probably do, but in any case I liked this and thought it was penned well.

[Coyote Poetry]

After a great storm. Your words are true. The world seem to slow down and we appreciate the calmness. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote