The Message

Look at first letter of every line

Have I been born to die?

All my memories slain

To force my mind to wonder so far

Every day a pain

 

Will the dark be gone?

I've lived it all before

Late comes the hour of fate

Late I come to the door

 

So, when will the trumpets sound?

Everlasting hope will come

Even in the darkest hour

 

I will be here to hear the drum

To fight to die to save

So be my fate, I take it

 

Every knee shall bow

No more sorrow, no more tears

Die we must, but paradise is near.

Author's Note

It's not much of a poem, sorry. Ignore grammar

Reviews

[Mockingbird]

a powerful message. 'will the dark be gone? i've lived it all before..." there is something about these words in the second stanza that make me feel like i can relate...still searching for that light.

[Ian]

Yes hopefully hate will see its end. I hope very much that you are right. That was a very good acrostic!

[Moonflower]

I like it, very good acrostic. :)

[Dana Kathryn]

I think it to be an Amazing write..I truly enjoyed it!! :)

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very interestly constructed and you kept the poem tight in line with the message..penned well

[Kara]

wow. very good write. it flows incredibly, and the rhyming definitely adds to it. and the hidden message is very clever. you could even make the letters bold, so the message is clearer.

[al25]

Really smart and your poem is still amazing. Great message 'Hate will see its end'. Enjoyed reading this. :)