To Stand Alone

The black sky rumbles;

it's raining ashes,

like snow flakes falling.

The lightning crashes.

Something foul is in the air.

The rumbling turns to footsteps;

the ashes dance.

Closer, closer, closer;

I have no chance.

They are here.

The pounding of the drums;

the beating of my heart.

Only I stand before them;

my enemy from the start.

A hand on my shoulder.

The shaking of my hands stop.

The ashes around me clear.

"You are not alone." A voice says.

A smile; my back up is here.

To fight alone is to die alone.

No one should die alone. 

Author's Note

ignore grammer, it's the words that count

Reviews

[Mariah Corey]

Awesome poem, it rocks. :D

[Rose of Gondor]

I especially loved the last for stanzas! Except the part about "my back up is here" made the magical moment snap a little. Maybe "my friend is here"? This is beautiful anyways. :D I hope I'll never have to fight/die alone!!!

[Tikaani Moon]

Pretty good

[Sarah]

It is amazing.
Realy good.
XD

[Etoiles]

I really enjoyed reading this.
Wonderful message.
:)

[Ian]

That was awesome! I'm with you all the way with that one!
AWESOME!!