Blurry

This is a song I WAS writing for my crush, but never finished.

You can tell a person's story, just by lookin' in their eyes

and you looked into mine

I'm tryin' to let it go

but I just want you to know

 

that I, I'm crazy over you

and when we're talking, I never say what I want to

You're on my mind

all the time

 

You make me believe

that I can do anything

If i try

I could fly

and touch the sky

And you, you make me think

that the whole world's never as it seems to be

When you're with me

I can't see

Everything is just so blurry

 

That day, I was changed

Never gonna be the same

because of you

and everything you do

Reviews

[Sujash I. Purna]

Quite romantic! I really appreciate your viewpoint in romance. Very good indeed!

[Michael.]

I like it but doesn't feel like its done for some reason.

[OR]

Despite the "I could fly and touch the sky" cliché
This is a very nice piece
Excellent
And well you should finish it
Peace!

[.]

...I really enjoyed this write, I like the sincereity of your words. This touched me. Very nicely written...

[James Paulin]

I think that this is the perfect poem for the rhyme that is usually out of place when so obvious. There is an playful charm that is sincere and pure. I enjoyed this.

[Veronica]

*clap,clap,clap*Bravo,Laura.