Lampara Encandescente

Viewing 2 sides to the same story

Lampara Encandescente

Eres mejor

Tengo corriente

Y.........valor

 

No quiero otra gente

Ni ocupaccion

Eres sufficiente

Con razon

 

Mis ojos tan abierto

Me cerebro tambien

Ahorra, soy intelligente

Escuchar me bien

 

Lampara Encandescente

Eres peor

Tengo...........trieste

Y...dolor

Eres la madre

de la mal intenccion

Y yo soy........culpable

 

Sus trucos son formidable

Sus consequencias peor

Matan muy lentamente

Con Angustia...........Y amor

 

Reviews

[Your Tasty Field Adviso..]

i'm curiouse as to what this poem really says. the rhythm is good and it has a really good flow, reguardless of the language. may i know what it does say?

[Raef C. Boylan]

I want to review but I can't read Spanish [is this Spanish?]...sorry.
Maybe you should have a look around for some others who share the language, get some reviews?

C