InsideWise

Just an observation/ poem.

Ahm gomma doom deedle dee.
Shake your beads and bones.
Ram damma dahm ora flipflop,
Ancient voices you intone....

You might ask your crystal ball,
There on it's silken bed.
Of what benefit to the living,
Be counsel with the dead?

Author's Note

Sorry about that all you soothsayers: you are full of shit.

Reviews

[vido.]

very simple and concise yet unique and interesting. a very well-written poem, well done!

[J. Marc]

OK! You know what they say....if all we do question about life could ultimately reveal themselves useful.....But then, what to do with all our existential questions....

[Kennedy]

xD so oddd but it suits u well

[Desert Dreamer]

A fun little rhyme...I've never had any desire to speak to the dead...I know many who WANT to believe it is possible and this desire gives power to those that claim to have the talent of hearing the dead.

[seeeker78]

"Of what benefit to the living,
Be counsel with the dead?"
That peice is excellent, and in a way empowering, cheers Tony :)

[An owl on the moon]

This is a playfully powerful glimpse into the world of knowing.. longing to find answers in the world beyond. Loved the lyric feel.

[Vincent Esprit FMI]

your final line does have a punching effet....it carries this entire piece of literary art! great write Tony

vincent

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

what a delightfully unique little ditty~ much enjoyed!~

[Ed Hart]

now i have laughter with my coffee

[jenniewren (J.W. Bouwma..]

LOVE this piece.. the rhythm is spot on, and fun too boot.

and the message even moreso