Tomate Feliz

....from the early morning garden...

Fine gravel, dances with the black soil,
But the earth trembles deep beneath my hoe.
The morning Sun, too hot on my bald head.
But who is unconcerned? The Happy Tomato.

Reviews

[luciddreamer]

At first this seemed a bit dark to me...I know...but then I re-read it and thought well maybe if we were all to do what we are meant to do things will change for us...kinda of like we are bringing the negativity to us by doing opposite of what we are suppose to be doing...I don't know how I could get that from such few words ..but that is the message I received...lol.....regardless thought provoking write:)
Peace
Robin

[Crow]

I love the simplicity, and truth of this piece. I miss having a garden, to just sit and watch the course of nature.

[Kennedy]

aww its adorable ^_^