Full Moon

Was inspired by looking at the full moon which turns blue tonight.....

Shadows fall across the sea,

Orange, green or blue, maybe

Silvery beam across the bay

Carrying my dreams away

 

I want to howl at the moon,

Amazonian spirit sings in tune,

Primeval urges roaring deep,

Within my castle and my keep

 

Bathing naked in the purest light,

Safe from darkness and the night,

All is falling away from me,

Spiritual renewal, finally free

Reviews

[Will Neill]

Sue, we all feel a little tenative when we first write something, our hope is it will be enjoyed-I am always drawn to the old fashioned rhyme.Excellant.
Will

[Sue]

Thanks Will - it was my first poem for a while and wondered if I could still do it and looks like I did ok :)

[TrimarcoRansome]

This is a very good piece of poetry, full moons do affect the way we feel and behave and here you totally encapsulate this into a well penned poem

[Sue]

Thanks, Helen, I wasn't sure about this one so feel more confident about it now :)