Brothers and Sisters

I wrote this at aged 16 so the writing is a little immature, but the feelings were still heart-felt....

Yes, we all have them, they’re everywhere around you

Not just flesh and blood but other people too

God wants us each to be as one

Because he loves everyone

 

We all love our brothers and sisters don’t we

But there are countless others that you can see

Who need the chance to laugh like you

And it’s for them I wish you’d spare a thought or two

 

Without those brothers and sisters we wouldn’t be complete

They’re everywhere, in houses, on the street

So if you do see someone who seems in need

Help them for then you’ll be a friend indeed

 

Don’t pass someone by without a friendly smile

It doesn’t really cramp your style

Because you could make someone happy today

By stopping and talking instead of hurrying away

Reviews

[Will Neill]

Sue, how right you are-we may not be related but we are all brothers and sisters in god's eyes.
Good Work.
Will

[Sue]

Thanks Will - it's funny I was worried about putting it up as I thought people would find it too simplistic but it's had some of the most views of all my poetry! :)

[Will Neill]

Sue, sometimes the less is best.
Take care.
Will

[Sue]

That's true :)