How Can I Trust You

How can I trust you

 

After life have sent its soul to you

And dreams fell under your shoe

Moon rotated twice and said its you

The one who killed the beautiful view .

 

You killed the stars glow at nights

You prisoned the sun at the days

You made the universe scream

From loneliness and fear .

 

You exposed the fire of my heart

And made it burn all people

You said I’m the one who was the reason

Of life’s destruction and sadness..

 

How can I trust you anymore

You killed them and me.

You prisoned the symbol of freedom

And killed the symbol of beauty.

 

How can I trust to live between your arms

Trust is like soul on earth

Once it’s gone, it will never be back

So Good bye to your trust. It’s gone 

 

But after all I still say you are the one I will always love and I will forget ,,forever it’s a love 

Author's Note

Hope you like..
to you....my love

Reviews

[Acer]

Yes, i really liked your this poem indeed. I liked here last stanza if i truly say,

How can I trust to live between your arms
Trust is like soul on earth
Once it’s gone, it will never be back
So Good bye to your trust. It’s gone

........
The wordings are quite nice, the line "trust is like a soul on earth", has really made an impact on me.

[stars are far]

thank you so much :)
hehe ..you gave me a new hope now.. because i havent got reviews from a while i thought that im getting bad .. :(
thank you

[Acer]

Good

[Lily Mae]

You only want to be with someone that feels the same as you do.. the passion, commitment and trust.. If you have that, that's when the fun begins and the worries are long gone.. You really were passionate with your emotions with this.. I hope the love you have is worthy of the brilliance that is you..xo

[stars are far]

aww thank you :))

[Desmund Tiny]

WOW..... it reminds me a friend's word

That Trust is like a paper, once you crumpled it you can never turn it back to the way it used to be.

I love it, how the emotions flow in this poem. ^w^

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Great writing once again...
I could read your poems; sad, love or otherwise all day :)

[Joan*Eckhart]

I like how well you convey your emotions through your poetry. Your words choices are always interesting and make me think.

[Akshat♥]

wow!!! loved it :) :)
so emotional...

[Tai Ryens]

I don't recall ever having read a word closely related to what you present forth here. Gee, an addiction to love; even when your lover is using you as a weapon either unconsciously or not is intense. Well done, I daresay.

[khalid]

it is really nicely penned. it shows alot of confusion between need to forget and sorrow for that relation and at the same time feeling the bitterness of losing him inspite of all the pain he caused to you..