The Immortal Friendship

Walking down the streets

Holding each other hands

looking towards the future

when you are 70 and im 60

we'll act kids with no shyness

With you im not the known me

with you its a special edition

created only for you

i act crazy, i pretend to be cool

i laugh so loud, and smile wierdly

i hold you like you are my sister

and love you more than my soul

im a kid between ur eyes

im a teenager in my actions

im with you everything i want to be

and you are everyone i need

Author's Note

To my best of my bestest friends hehe <3 Yaseen Saloo (soulcrusader) <3
We will stay friends to infinity and beyond <3

Reviews

[Wórdsmíth]

That's too pretty again, but got confused to think that which one's you, i mean Are you in green dress, or the next one's who, is that your immoral or immortal...lol...
just kiddin',
nice write, this's the next one pretty awesome write that i read out by you...colorin''s good as well, but you ahould have to write more when these kid'sll b grow-up..lol...
well written, nice piece.

[stars are far]

haha...Thank you so much..and yups hope i write more about this awesome friendship with my bff yaseeen :))
thank yiu :)

[Tai Ryens]

Nostalgia emphasizing the anticipation of a future? Not a topic most writers can cleverly entwine, yet you do it as if you do it everyday. I always seem to notice the best poetry is written of relationship and memory.

[khalid]

very nice image for the expected future. i loved how you have penned this.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Awwwww....

This poem is the sweetest poem everrrr....

and you are the sweetest thing everrrrr....

love youuuu sis :)

[stars are far]

awww you are more sweet

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

you areeeee, and thats final

[stars are far]

hehe okie its fine ... you are more

[Devanshu Rajput]

a nice poem to describe your immortal friendship.....hope it would not be ended....

[stars are far]

Thank you :)

[Devanshu Rajput]

welcome