I Thought You Were My Romeo

I thought you were my Romeo

 

Through every book I move between its trees and climbed its mountains

I imagined you holding my hand and walking by me, playing in its fountains.

Through every dream I traveled in ,and on its clouds I flied so high

I put you in my heart and with me you used to happily fly.

 

I took you to those castles that were built with the sand and flowers

I showed you to all of those secret words that were split on the gates.

Our names we etched on ever sand piece and every flower had our love stories.

With every hug and every kiss the seraphs used to envy us baby.

 

I raised your name to the highest sky and a castle was built in the heaven for you,

I put you straight after God, and I loved you more than I loved my own self.

You were my ice in the summer times and my fire in the winder days

You were that immortal flower that used to dance for me every day in the year  .

 

I thought you were my Romeo, no you were more than that I guess

But you were never that one that I can call the father of my kids.

Trust me and every flower in that castle we built and every flower we held

I’m lonely without you my baby..Its just I thought you were my Romeo.

Author's Note

I hope you like this :)

Reviews

[cycy]

I’m lonely without you my baby..Its just I thought you were my Romeo
I can relate, I thought he was my soulmate :(

[Chris]

A real and very heart-felt piece. The only flaws are of English as perhaps a second language ...nature. But the understanding of your thoughts did not suffer at all.

[Ravyne Hawke]

The sadness and longing come through brilliantly in your words... love your imagery!

[Katherine]

Once again proving you're an amazing and romantic poet! Keep it up!

[Pax]

Lonely, beautiful, bittersweet and it longs to be read...

What makes a poem beautiful to read is that, even in its about pain, it is the down pour of your emotions that makes it so delicate in our understanding...

very nice my friend.

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you hope right . i realy love it. it s kind of huge poetry. big imagination and understaning of love with humble. thank you so much

[MsJewel]

Bittersweet and beautiful poetry my friend

:) Julie

[Stefanie Holmes]

"Through every book I move between its trees and climbed its mountains"
The word 'climbed' should actually be climb in this sentence to make it present tense. The rest of your paragraph is written in present tense except for that one word.

I thought the poem was sweet and romantic. :)

~Stefanie

[stars are far]

Dark romance :) how would i write romance and sweet when i lost him..
Thank you for you point i will correct it ..and also for your review

[Stefanie Holmes]

Haha maybe I should clarify... I was referring to the wording being sweet and romantic... the poem itself was sad and heartbreaking. This is what happens when I review late at night!

[stars are far]

Haha it is okay..thank you ver much for your review

[A. Amos]

Each word perfectly describes the romance... I admire your skills.