Until When ?

Through every day’s dream that fight the reality

And with every new word invented in this world.

I try to forget that I have to commit to my loyalty

And move on over your body to write a new love word.

 

But yet, my heart calls your name in its sleep and awake

My soul revive through your words and with every view.

I break, and die every time I try to forget you and take a break

Then I find myself again wishing that I didn’t meet you.

 

I  miss the day I met you in, and the day you left my sight

I call you and I say I need you my mighty knight

I love you each and every day under the light

But I cry over you and your love each night.

Author's Note

well, not perfect..but hope you like

Reviews

[MsJewel]

I could feel the sadness in your words...wonderful writing my friend.

:) Julie

[willweb]

This poem was very good. I could feel this. I enjoyed reading this today.

[Anahat]

Wow this one was nice...I loved the ending of your poem...Well done :)

[AMMD]

I've been there. Unrequited love is the worst pain in the world. You've penned the excruciating experience well.

[Leslie Philibert]

I do, nearly perfect too ! Maybe fight needs an s ! and awake and revive..

[wordman]

lots of emotions in this write ahh love can`t live without it and sometimes with it

[Ayushi]

Well your emotions and feelings are just perfect.
Nicely written :)

[A. Amos]

Well penned and your loving heart is felt

[Stephen]

An emotional poem which comes from your raged heart. Emotionally beautiful!