Bleeding Forever

All I want to do is hold you ,really close

Punch you in the face really so hard

Kick your a*s until you fart

And to your stomach, I throw a dart.

 

All I want to do is hold you, really close

To eat you with an iron teeth and hit your face.

To bite your everything until you scream

I want to set you there and make you the target of my gun,

 

All I want to do is hold you ,really close

Hold your throat until you choke

Until you scream to the heavens asking for help

And it says Its your turn to get what you gave once.

 

As you scream and shout with no help and no hand

I’ll hold your hand really tight, kiss it, bite it

Until you bleed…I’ll watch you bleed, enjoy the scene

Forever I will die watching you bleeding with my red hands.

Author's Note

I have very negative feelings and split them over here , to that someone.
Hope you enjoy the killing scenes haha :) ^-^

Reviews

[Tai Ryens]

In this I see the slivers of bad feelings blending in with the love you feel for a person that add to pent-up frustration felt towards said person, leading to the very confusing, very giddy form of youthful love blooming. Not quite new, not quite old, but in the transition of blossoming into a pretty flower with a change so sudden that it takes time to make it through the storm. Well done.

[Donyay Thomas]

I like it. That's how I feel when I'm upset

[Einstein Noodle]

oh my goodness .. such a power house of angst .. love the straight forward way you have expressed it .. scary .. yes .. very scary .. thank goodness for writing .. for creative expression .. and for passion .. one hell of a poem beautiful stars!
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[Kasey Miriam]

This poem shows hate very well. great job

[Ayushi]

I loved this..
This blend of love and hatred seems quite amazing :)

[wordman]

damn I hope I never get on your bad side

[Anahat]

hahha...complete frusration expressed with powerful words...good job :)